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Shade exercise #1

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First attemp of shading in this case a ball. I would love someone to give some advice and point out what's wrong in here.
Made with a B pencil.
Image size
2560x1920px 1.97 MB
Make
SAMSUNG
Model
GT-I8190L
Shutter Speed
25000/1000000 second
Aperture
F/2.6
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jan 29, 2015, 11:43:27 PM
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Hi there! Not bad really! That's quite right though the photo has a week contrast.
Well, I wouldn't ever use a B pencil for such kind of work. That's way too soft. I'd take a big paper(A3 for example) and pencils:h-h2
Possibly the reflex is't perfect here. It seems like it's brighter that the flare. And the floor is too dark to my view.
So, that's nice, but you could have done much better. Will you try again?